In this post I talk about my future, well, I talk about my ideal future because nobody knows what will happen, some people says that on 2012 our world will finish as we know it, but forgetting this “prophecy” my near future I see it with my sociology degree and working in the area, working around my birth place (see profile) because I never liked Santiago as a place to live, work or anything. I like to live in my own house but this is not a priority because there isn’t rush to leave my parents’ house.
So, after a stable work, saving some money and travel to Japan, not for live in there but a couple of months only to learn real Okinawa Karate, yes, I’m an amateur “karateka” so I would like to travel to know the cradle of real karate and some of the most historical places like Himeji Castle, Mount Fuji, etc.
This is one of my primary objectives once I become an independent “boy
”, but on the other hand I would like to enter in local politics, like a member of the local council or something like that, but definitively on my birth place, or could be near but not too far
Carlos,
ResponderEliminarI see you have a clear idea of what you want to do in your future life, That’s good.
You´ve written a clear and easy to read post with good sentences and just a few problems here and there:
-(people says) people = persons = they, so:
-(on 2012): In + year: , in 1985, in 2005, etc
-(our world will finish as we know it): Compare ‘our world as we know it will finish’ and your sentence. See the difference?
-(after a stable work, saving some money and travel to Japan, not for live): What’s wrong with the verb form in ‘travel’ and ‘live? Why?
-( like a member of ). What’s the difference between ‘as’ and ‘like’ a member. Which one do you mean?
-(or could be near ): What’s missing here?